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Freckles

Light Chernyshova
When

When caught in the fractional drops
Winters drowns dilapidated pie
We will survive and lunges in the April
Like bears after hibernation in a den ,

and squinting from the honeymoon heat
understand - is gone, otvylo , otkruzhilo ,
And notes of sparrows on the wires    
Or is it - the samba or the blues ...
And us with prams , in the joyful majesty,
toothless smile tot ,
March


 
consoled Martha Whites ,
capricious , changeable ,
March wept in the apron
I'm afraid , afraid yasnolikogo ,
ink spread out , my God ,
Blush bullfinch on the apron
A fiance - on the verge of ...
March turned willow
tickles her sweet cheeks , But he fluffed the willow ,
stretch to yasnolikomu hands - twigs ...
So come April
Waits , sighs , thin twigs Iterates , jams tender lumps ...
This time
            

Time - Bells
Time - happy again
Time - open

and fluttering curtains
Hearing - breaking the ice time - through the thickness of the walls

Time - paintings by Monet ,
Instead of paintings by Van Gogh
time - forget the sorrow ,
lived in the bottom of yesterday ...
Light Chernyshova

Reviews
Svetik , your freckles like a breath of fresh spring air in this intolerable stuffiness )

The first is very touching )

" We will survive and lunges in the April
Like bears after hibernation in a den , "

' and the notes of sparrows on the wires
play march - alive , alive , alive " - just heard ) ) )

" toothless smile tot ,
And something prokurlykaet a bird . "

second melodic , reminiscent of ancient folk stoneflies )

Third breathes freedom and smells of the sea ) Cheers and calls fling his arms toward life )

In general, each in its own beautifully )

Oksana Usova , Boyko   14.08.2010 17:16     alleged violations of rules

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