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Patience

Gennadiy Bannikov
B cup full of patience - sweat dripping, sticky and bitter.
Dully think circles - an idiot - you must, must be the same as ...

Hour remaining before going to the .... The sky, it seems to me in shock.
Sense of the road - my counterpart - a burning feeling of heartburn.

A roof does not go, I ride one - sorry for my old slate.
Chance to rest from each other will give, if we stay alive.

Eternal Dutchman flying liquid. Russian? Fourteen drops!
I am ashamed to be proud of the greatness lies, and applaud the toad.

Patience - fragile china - cracks were on order.
Bowl with such immemorial has not been filled even once ...

Patience - waiting room.
Again, bear, waiting for the court ... knowing that the cup is empty.


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Good poem. Just tired. In my opinion, critical to themselves. Several summarizing life. But the interesting and imaginative. I liked it. Most importantly, let it be NEW patience. After all, use a cracked, and the more flowing cups - unhygienic and not for good!
Wish you peace and light!
Excuse me, now you have read my poem. I made a typo in it, distorting its meaning to you. Banner Sulde god of war - not blue, and white. Once again I ask your forgiveness.
Yours, Elena

Helen Mae   10.09.2010 15:48     Alleged violations of rules
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Helen, thank you for a careful reading, I now turn to you again peep.

Gennadiy Bannikov   10.09.2010 16:00   Alleged violations of rules
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