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Incurable
Not a morning news is so from their homeland - a white hair.
Returned to me nowhere. Ravings of the prodigal son.
At dawn, stronger head grizzled voice
Monotone recitative naskripyvaet akin,

Like a snake, like skiing - mile after mile:
'What then, O my soul, what will happen next ... "
In this city all morning light to the eyebrow, and the past.
Past the eyes, face, smile.

Royally demand and naidlinneyshee believe -
Earned climbing Pride of Sisyphus "Order!
Mixing up a calendar with the exit door
Picking the key verb February afternoon.


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I liked very much. Once I'd removed the exclamation point after "order". Exclamation, generally opasnae mechanisms.

Dmitry pairwise   19.02.2009 14:56     Alleged violations of rules
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Thanks, old man)

Incurable   19.02.2009 16:06   Alleged violations of rules
Maybe you're right, what about the sign. I'll think about it yet.

Incurable   19.02.2009 16:27   Alleged violations of rules
Rights not me, right as always, IB, "to imitate the time."

Dmitry pairwise   20.02.2009 00:45   Alleged violations of rules
I stalled at the thought - how to transfer self-irony with punctuation marks, if not an exclamation? No point does not look or dots.

Incurable   22.02.2009 03:57   Alleged violations of rules
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