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Baptist

Incurable
At five in the morning, I started to think about God -
And scared, like a stone in a window or a bullet.
Nothing collapsed in the kitchen has not grown at the threshold -
Silence. Empty apartment.
Haunting my god, me not knowing
Anything except what happened to me too early
Say, not what is, as the clank of a tram
Like a burn on the retina from the sun, like a shot, like a wound.
 
I'm walking on its vast empty apartment
Remembering the dead, remembering the dead. And others.
How animated furniture, knowledgeable about the world
Only that it dusty three-room and quiet at night.
I'm standing at the window as a target in an abandoned dash
For which a transgression under fire was the work.
Leafless and chipped paint on the jacket
Reminder of the past, the past ... But that, like this
Personalities is difficult to admit that without God
World becomes butaforichney, talentless, cardboard,
Like a flat seat on the wall, pierced with harpoons -
Nose pine guy.
On this fire ... Even my pain - for fun.
Amputated spirit - phantom pain ...

And my god sprinkles porch and track
That I should not slip, a mixture of sand and salt.
"You never know what can, and who look in the evening" -
Provorchit, fueling a fire, feed the dog.
And sit down in a chair with a novel. And not far off dream.
Knocks the snow, the steppe is empty and no one opposes the darkness.




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"And the soul, she would be happy
Return, but no way.
Boarded up the house as it should,
And closed for two locks.

And it could, in general,
In the gap under the door to slip,
So proud not only robschut,
And do not burn someone else's candle.
And do not burn someone else's candle. "

Hello brother!
I read your line thrice. Downloaded to a separate folder. And most importantly - thinking about the state of it - just before daybreak when the night seems darker than most - now want to think.

And that's my review, and evaluation.

Avicenna   27.04.2010 03:42     Alleged violations of rules
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My friend, thank you very much) I have never and do not appreciate - you do not seem quite poyanl - with whom you are dealing. I'm not an editor, not a poet, not a writer, not a reducer. I am a professional diver) now. I just read or what I like or do not read something that I do not like. And if I did not like something, it does not mean - in the trash.
Write on, brother.
I do something here with this.

Incurable   28.04.2010 22:49   Alleged violations of rules
Strong said.
Only the gear change on the conductor (as a composter) than completely remove all the questions)
Zvinyay, brother, and I forgot about this stupid request (only serves to justify my drunken state at the time of writing).
To send a mass in the cart must be assured by someone maybe more than a diver, in that you're right, but I understand you perfectly (if you're on the muezzins call to prayer, then I can hear exactly the same every day). Especially when it occurs early in the morning, in the silence of the sleeping city yet.
Yes, but remove the link now, we assume that the incident drowning)

Avicenna   02.05.2010 17:14   Alleged violations of rules
Of appeals - that I said, for instance)) I also heard different things, sometimes they just yell very much at the wrong time. And where is thy dwelling, if the same calls you hear?

Incurable   02.05.2010 22:06   Alleged violations of rules
Dwelling place, is that you correctly observed)
Do not add his aura of mystery, but simply so as not to offend his other companions, to whom pelengovatsya tactfully refused boom start from the bottom of the genus proximum - cosmopolitan, within the basin of the Caspian Sea, as well as middle and central Azii.Tem more so that any point this space may be under my soles tomorrow.
A scuba diving is great, like all of what the soul can relax.
Here povypadayut past his teeth and matted hair permanently on the sides, too, will become old, but already the sea, like a wolf ... yes no dromedaries to be exact)
Take train, then?

Avicenna   03.05.2010 07:28   Alleged violations of rules
"Well, the mystery either run - a private affair of each) to train - I am a good instructor will teach.

Incurable   03.05.2010 23:00   Alleged violations of rules
C Victory Day you, brother!

Peace in the soul in the house and in the skies overhead.

Avicenna   09.05.2010 15:01   Alleged violations of rules
Yeah, man. And to you peace. Congratulations.

Incurable   09.05.2010 19:19   Alleged violations of rules
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